帮忙改短文~！！！
I went to the TiananMen in the vacation.Although I had been to there for so many times ,I feel it changes every day .
I like red because it stand for the successful and happy. So when I see the flag is drifting with the winds ,I feel very exciting .
More and more people want to go to TiananMen in the vacation. I ’m so surprised to see the juck is more less than each year.
In this year , so many policeman walk on the spuare in order to keep the customers safe.
最好是能帮我补充一些新的句子~！多谢~！
参考答案:I had been to there 改为I hab been there就可以了(there是副词,不加to)
it stand for 改为it stands for(第三人称单数动词要加s)
the successful and happy改为the success and happiness(要用名词)
I feel very exciting 改为I feel very excited(excited是感到兴奋的,exciting是令人兴奋的)
more less改为much less,much才能修饰比较级
policeman 改为policemen(复数形式)
customers safe改为customers' safety(名词所有格,safe的名词)
另外,应该是篇日记或者游记吧,建议全篇都要用过去时,