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Hawaiian Islands, with enough sunshine, fine climate and four seasons warm as spring, is famous in the world as a resort of preventing heat and cold, traveling and convalescence.
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参考答案:Hawaiian Islands, with abundant sunshine, mild climate and four seasons as warm as spring, is famous to the world as a resort for those fond of traveling, needing a recuperation, and seeking for a shield from harsh heat and cold.