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我的老板说：我下面的那段英文有English Writing Mistake，我想知道错在哪里了，以及为什么错了，谢谢大家了！

Hi All,

I would like remind you to join the Test Fest if you still not.

Test Fest is an important company wide activity, with your contribution, it will continuing improve our quality and elevate the company’s focus on quality.

Please remember every staff is welcomed to join it and will get paid for valid bug reporting. And the contest will not last forever, it will be closed by 3/31/2007.

Please hurry up!

改正版：

Hi All,

I would like to remind you of joining the Test Fest if you still haven't.

Test Fest is an important company which offers wide activity, with your contribution, it will continue improving our quality and elevating the company’s focus on quality.

Please remember that every staff is welcome to join it and will get paid for valid bug reporting. And the contest will not last forever, it will be closed by 3/31/2007.

Please hurry up!

1. would like to do sth

2. remind sb of sth/doing sth

3.will continuing improve ,will后加动词原形，continue doing sth ，后面有and 并列，所以都improve and elevate都用动词ing。

4 every staff is welcomed to join ， welcome可以做形容词，不用被动语态

5 Test Fest is an important company wide activity, 句子不完整

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