求助``修改英语文章
As a student, I of course cannot be concentrated on studying one hundreds percent, I need combine exertion with rest. Studying is not everything; oppositely, if I get some rest suitably I would do much well or get a higher mark. Cell phone is also a camera, a MP3 player, a messenger and a game player. I could download and save many songs, take and save some pictures or talk over the phone with friends who on the Internet when I get leisure. It provides me many interesting things to do so that I can relax entirely, and help me to achieve the goal easily.
谢谢各位啊``
参考答案:one hundreds →one hundred
need combine →need to combine
much well →more well
to achieve →achieving
who on the Internet →who are on the Internet
我能找到的就是这些错