一则短短的小文...
大家好,明天是学期末最后一天,我在英语初级培训班的课程
也要结束了,老师希望我们明天发表一则短短的演讲,主题不
拘,所以我写了下面这篇稿子。我不晓得有没有语法错误,可
以请大家帮忙指正吗?麻烦大家了,谢谢!
School's life I love
I don't like to live tensely for a living.
But I often did it when I was working.
It seems to me that a campus is just likes a big park.
In which people will feel fresh and relaxed.
I love to stay in such environment and
I really hope I could be a student on campus forever.
But I know.
Under the realistic conditions, it's impossible to me.
I can only treasure this chance learning at school.
Today is the last day of this semester,
I will still enjoy it and remember it, for ever and ever.
另外,不晓得下面A这句话可以改写成B句这样吗?因为我想强
调校园就像公园这个表达,可是我不知道改过之后语法是否正
确,也麻烦大家了,谢谢!
A> It seems to me that a campus is just likes a big park.
B> A campus seems to be just a big park to me.
参考答案:题目就错了
school's life???
直接用 school life就可以了
或者可以说life in the school???