两篇改错
以下短文每行有一个错误,有可能没有错的I once work in a factory. On 1a rain night, all the lights of the factory went 2out all at once. I rushed out but could see 3nothing. Fortunately the warned system was 4direct connected with the police station, and 5for three or four minutes four police cars 6arrived at the front gate. The police looked at 7all round the factory, but were found nothing 8unusual. A police told me that the rain must 9have affected the electricity system and cause 10a short circuit.Aeroplanes are slow driving me mad. I live near an 11airport and passing planes can be heard at night and day. 12The airport was built during the war, but for some reasons 13it could not be used then. Last year, therefore, it came 14to use. Over a hundred people must have been driven 15away from their homes by the noise. I am one of a few 16people left. Sometimes I think this house will be knock 17down by a passing plane. I have offered a large sum of 18money to go away, but I determined to stay here. 19Everybody says I must be mad and they are probably right. 20
参考答案:once work in a factory. On 1
once这里是曾经,,所以work应该用过去式worked
a rain night, all the lights of the factory went 2
rain---->rainy,这个很明显
out all at once. I rushed out but could see 3
but连接的是两个句子,所以后面could前的I不能省
nothing. Fortunately the warned system was 4
warned改为warning,报警系统warning system
direct connected with the police station, and 5
direct改为directly,应该用副词
for three or four minutes four police cars 6
没发现错
arrived at the front gate. The police looked at 7
looked 后的at去掉,用做look的不及物用法
all round the factory, but were found nothing 8
were去掉
unusual. A police told me that the rain must 9
police改为policeman
have affected the electricity system and cause 10
a short circuit.
cause改为caused,完成时态