急~,在线等~~~,帮忙修改几句话.谢谢大家!
Thanks so much for last time’s talk, I learned a lot. You let me know to work at lotus is a golden opportunity which both can (scratch a living)安身立命 and propagate Buddha. It is a great opportunity for me. I am interest in it and value it very much. As I said, I am the volunteer in the temple now but I would like to balance the time between the work and be the volunteer on the premise of that you think I am the right person for this job. Anyway, work is always the first; I would like to be the volunteer at my leisure time. My expected salary is RMB4000 (before tax).Hope have chance working with you.
大意如此,也祈请工作经验丰富的高手,帮润色一下如何写的更圆满?尤其是在写期望工资时,只简单的写出多少,还要多说吗?
谢谢大家!
参考答案:I learned a lot from our last interview, thank you very much. I start to know that working on lotus is a good opportunity to settle down myself and propagate Buddha. I am interested in it and regard it very much. As I said, I am a volunteer in temple now, but I would like to balance the time between work and being a volunteer on the premise of that you think I am the right person for this job. Anyway, work always take the priority, I would like to be the volunteer in my leisure time. My expected salary is 4000RMB (before tax). I am looking forward to working with you. 不需要画蛇添足了，期望工资明确写出来就可以了，顺便：为什么不是税后？