帮我修订一下翻译
熟悉网络组建及网络管理，能够进行网络维护。熟悉WINDOWS2003服务器，能够按照管理要求进行相应的配置。能够熟练配置CISCO产品，并以较高的分数通过了CCNA（思科网络工程师）认证。熟悉网络安全，能够制订并实施安全策略，对系统及相应设备进行审核与评估。专业英语能力强，现已能阅读并翻译计算机英文资料。
我的翻译：
Familiar network establishment and network management, can carry out network maintenance. Familiar WINDOWS2003 server, and can carry out corresponding configuration according to requirement. Can skilled configure Cisco products. Furthermore, with higher score, I have passed through CCNA certification.Familiar network security, can work out and implement secure policy, auditing and evaluate systematic and corresponding equipment. Have a strong ability of professional English, can now already read and translate English computer information.
修订一下英文翻译即可，谢谢！
参考答案:The familiar network sets up and the network management, can carry on
the network maintenance. The familiar WINDOWS2003 server, can defer to
the management request to carry on the corresponding disposition. Can
skilled dispose the CISCO product, and passed CCNA by the high score
(Cisco network engineer) to authenticate. The familiar network
security, can draw up and implement the security policy, to is
systematic and the corresponding equipment carries on the verification
and the appraisal. Specialized English ability, already could read and
the mechanical dictionary English material.